Night Mistress

please help me.

in my latest story, The Elemental Gem, I start off in the prologue with a old woman and little girl. the little girl is asking her grandma to tell her ...

dreamworx95: thanks for your review. I have one question thought: did you read the actucal thing or did you just read the review? because I have already fix the opening. ...

hey, your story seems interesting enough for me to want to read more. Some of your grammar can be fixed when you re-read your way though it. And some of ...

Oh my god! I'm so nervous about posting this. I have about thirty pages more, but this is just the first part of the prologue. Prologue (edited) The summer night ...

This is a cute prologue! It is a prologue, right? Here's an idea: I'm assuming that this is a prologue and the whole rest of the story will be Eirian's ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS. tell us a little more about yourself. what are you planning to write here? Poetry, romance...etc I have the same questions as Rosey in the books. ...

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I am brown too.

nope. um....brown?

hey, Evi. Welcome to YWS. Since rosey asked all the question that I wanted to. All i can say is: if you need anything, including friendship, feel free to pm ...

can you rip this part?

no green eyes. ...hazel eyes?

Title: The Elemental Gem Genre: fantasy Type: prolouge Lenght: light Link:

can you review this for me?